A wonder to see, so full of glee
Needlessly pleasing thee, you see
An extravagance of emotional gold
Hides a secret, kept untold
Forever, you go, without a clue
Through a door, one you threw
Into a place you placed, with grace
Traced with the pace of evil escapades
Tracking your lack of covering tracks
Reality so bent, no one can know
You go nowhere, but explore your world
A tear through a forest, or bear you might be
You still lay there, eyes roaming free
For your mind walks, although you're blind
Who knows the secrets you can find?
Please tell me what you think
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i like this, babydoll
hey darling,
havnt been on in a while...like...6 months actually..
but yeah i like this one
you find those secrets..
♥
**kisses**
Samantha
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Sweet...
Like unlocking a new world....
Nice piece
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Pretty
I hardly think it is bland. Just because Connor has no imagination doesn't mean it lacks imagery.
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