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Shotgun

Shotgun your love,
Shotgun your name,
Shotgun the ring
And the small town fame.
Shotgun the dress,
Shotgun the train,
Shotgun a honeymoon
Out in sunny Spain.
Shotgun the babies,
Shotgun the honey,
Shotgun leaving you
Without any money.

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Huh. Rubbish rhyming but I had fun writing it.

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  • kennethlaney
    June 25, 2007

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    Cute

    Reminds me of the old so called shotgun weddings.
    How have you been?
    "BOO"


  • cutiepie gold member
    June 15, 2007
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    It worked for me ....shotgun, short sharp blast, as your lines show have great impact. Clever


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 14, 2007

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    LOL Well that was definitely cute. And probably very true. Incredible the things our minds come up with. It is fun! Keep on writing. Thanks for sharing.

    Jeannie


  • Vicky Shwepps
    May 21, 2007
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    lol, i love it! i really like it, it kinda works...in a weird way. xx