You're the addiction I'm trying to quit.
I don't know what possessed me to ever commit,
To being with you for so long.
All that I did was compromise all that made me strong.
But I've seen the light,
I've started to fight.
No more will you keep me in this trance,
I'm walking away without a second glance.
I'm done with you and your childish games,
Done with watching your life go up in flames.
No more will I worry about you catching mine on fire too,
I'm done with immaturity, DONE WITH YOU.
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I really am churnin these out.
woww.
Anyways comments much appreciated.
Whew! Any thoughts? Comments?
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I like it alot......
If more girls wuld do this and just forget about everything the guy has ever done then less girls i think would end up not gettign hurt.......but its not that simple though to just get up and leave and forget about everything as it is to say or write it.....i like this one alot and its because this is what should happen but it could never be done........as often as you want it too.......favorite part was:
You're the addiction I'm trying to quit.
I don't know what possessed me to ever commit,
To being with you for so long.
All that I did was compromise all that made me strong
Which is the very begging (and dont get me wrong i loved the whole thing)because its saying rite then and there that this is an addiction and that your trying to quit but you might not be able to......
Good job i love it.......and like i sed be 4 easier said than done......
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awsome!!!
I love this!!!It rocks my world. I can totally relate. A lot of teenage girls can. I'm glad i stumbled across this. I ran into my ex yesterday, well my ex fiance and i was thinking about going back to him, but this made me think about all the stuff he done to me. thank you so much. You just saved me from more hurt than i handle again.
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well done sis!
i liked it... i duno what else to say but wow! amazing.
love you heaps and heaps
XoXoXoXoX
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