If you are albe to raed tihs
I'll be treluy srupirsed
But aperprnlty we raed
Wtih mroe tahn our eeys
Our mnids are mroe pweorufll
Tahn msot plepoe wluod tinhk
Bluly for me,bceuase my selpnlig sitkns
So it deos not ralely metatr if you can selpl
Bacuese waht you witre the mnid wlil tlel
Author notes
just thought i would write something a little different.i saw this little thing on myspace,and i was intrigued and inspired.so this was the result
let me know waht you think
Please tell me what you think
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i liked that chica!!
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My, how very clever of yo. I had some trouble there for a moment.
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You have a lot of of spelling mistakes here.
1] The first word should be "Fi";
2] The first word of lone 2 should be "L'il";
3] The first word of line 3 should be "Tub";
4] The third word of line 7 should be "em";
5] Line 8 should read "os ti deos nto ralely metatr fi yuo nac selpl".
Bste Wshise frmo Enda.
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thank you edna but i didnt explain it further ,see you have to keep the first and last letter the same for it to work,so 3 letter and 2 letter words stay the same
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Wonderful
You are an inventive genius indeed! And a bit naughty too, perhaps. What a novel way to say this simple thing so simply yet in a manner that must catch one's eyes. Many cheers!
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thank you my friend,glad you enjoyed it
i wouldnt say genius though,just bored.
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Life is boring if one makes it so. I have somehow felt that you do not belong to that category. You have a powerful mind that is capable of finding a meaning and purpose of living.
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that is very intresting. it is amazing how much power our brains truely hold,i love the idea and the fact that you made a poem out of this is wonderful. and it is good because your spelling really is atrocious.
wonderful write my dear,i wonder what other comments you will recieve for this.
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