Feathers fall from angel wings into the valleys of the dead
Calling the beast forth...assistance in destruction
Piercing lies surround gouged hearts breathing in guaze
Trembling the hands of the angel
Now...
The time sweetness, plead in all the purity you claim
Your possesions are pathetic
Pitiless corruption and damnation of treasured souls
And...
If thou shall call for me I will answer
No question lies here
Drowning in the cries for attention, trying to find you, but you run
Hiding in the callousness that you've made your home
Repent...
Ghastly shreiks of sanity clinging to the bloodstained tears
The demented show the way...twizitd
Creeping along with a substance only the devil can bare to ingest
Stripping flesh from bone and life from heart
Yet...
I hear my name engulfed in the lips that have perpetrated my only existance
Inside my mind enveloped in the maddness called home
Glance at me now and solidify this selfless attempt
How dare you call me selfish?
You fool, I am not your mirror, I call the raven for you
Banish yourself from my sight and mind and lie to me no more
Cease...
To be, to function, to breath these loving words spouted from my mouth
Condemn me now to my soundproof tomb
Lock me inside, away from you untrustworthy tongue
I care not for love anymore, this word you use is foreign to me
So...
Set me free and watch me fly if you "love" me
But that is why I lay sulking in the dark debut of Hell on Earth
Premiere tickets to the show, you're even puttin me in the front row
Aw, what I treat I could deem a gesture of good faith
I said could...but this bitch, this whore as you call me
You've try to make me that, attempting to convince your mind that it's me
I'm the problem
Rape me...
rape me of my fears and sorrows, dry these these burning tears before they cut open my flesh
My cheeks so pristine and innocent until you kissed them
NO MORE!
I'm done with the gimmicks, don't try and censor my life, go live your own
The one you forgotten you had because "I was your world"
Cut out the dusty mantle on which you laid my heart
I placed it in your care, it was torn and mangled
Give me your ignorant bliss I wish to hear no more of these treasonous words
Shake me from this dream of your touch if you must, but leave!
Do not save me your ghost in hopes of rekindling,
There's nothing left but cursed ashes now...lit by crumbling embers
Goodbye my hate...
Author notes
these are just random emotions that I needed to get out of my system...thank you for your time!
Please tell me what you think
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the end is near
the system dropped my comment: this starts as a revelations style end of the world stream of thoughts and ends up as a repudiation of bad treatment or a difficult relationship, terrific energy and efort to produce this braod piece and the writing is very expressive and dramatic in tone and phrasings..overall a fine effort...PK
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interesting....
I like the poem and the format and the effort you have put into this work. Very descriptive choice of words used.
But the large number of spelling errors jars the senses.
How about an edit and a spell check?
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I ran it through spell check, so if there's something you see wrong please point it out...
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Sorry didn't mean to be nit picky...
But valleys, destruction, perpetrated and treasonous are mispelled. Not sure what twitzid is...
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it's fine, most were just missing a letter and when I read through them I didn't catch them...I type really fast and sometimes get ahead of myself. I was not trying to be rude...just asking if you could point them out so I could fix them. Thank you for noticing and saying something.
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Main thing is that it is a fine poem. One you can be justly proud of! I look forward to reading more of your work!
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why thank you...you are very kind. I am proud of it.
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