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"The second warning is a bullet"

The first warning's a weapon
And the second a bullet
If you think you're tasting freedom
Then you're seriously mistaken

A gun can fire over a greater distance
Than you'd expect us to be present
My bullets will follow the dot on your head
Until it punctures the skull and leaves you for dead

My first warning's a weapon
And the second taste's like steel
My final freedom feels like yours
But you won't see the sky until the day you die

"This is your first warning"
And your second is a bullet
Came before "good morning"
And ended up "rest in peace"

The first warning's a weapon
And the second a bullet
If you think then you've failed
Because I know how you think

The bullet travels towards the target
And you'd be surprised how much you look like one
The bullet hits with such a force that
It can blow the head clean off on a good day

"This is your first warning"
And your second is a bullet
Came before "good morning"
And ended up "rest in peace"

Death shows it's face on my bullet
Death's face is my bullet
Will you smile in the face of death?
Or will you fall like those before you?

Brutal but neccessary the bullet was built to kill
Death is the end but the grave is a new beginning
This is your first and final warning
That makes the second one a bullet

"This is your first warning"
And your second is a bullet
Came before "good morning"
And ended up "rest in peace"

Rest in peace, because those that can't sleep
Have nothing left for them
Rest in peace, I know you'll have trouble
But it's much easier to rest in peace
Than it is to live in chaos

The first warning's a weapon
And the second one is fatal
If you try to escape alive
Then you're going to end up dead
And if you're going to try anything
You should know that
The second warning is a bullet

Author notes

I wrote this as a freewrite, but I liked how it turned out...

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  • VampxOfxVengeance
    May 22, 2007
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    i want the gun.....give me the gun.......if u want to know y i want to shoot myself (which u probably dont) then ushould go to this site: http://saichotictech.net/Leekspin.html

    It is the most annoying this alive *Ive been spinning for 3 hours and 46 minutes!!!! neways i love the poem! it sounds like something i would write! good luck writing!

    Cody


    • bdean2020
      May 24, 2007
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      You're crazy... I hate you

      You're crazy if you've been spinning for almost 4 hours.
      I hate you for sending me to a site so hypnotic.... I hate it and I've only been spinning for 17 mins... How do you get out of it? help!!!


  • intanglio2ring
    May 21, 2007

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    (ducks down to escape the warning bullet!) Very engaging with the gun pointed in that direction!
    Bang! Bang! Certainly an enjoyable read!
    Thanks for your entry into my contest & Good Luck!
    Tang