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precious



in this
copper pot
you have become
fine porcelain

no price is too big
if half a smile
conquers your face




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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    May 20, 2007

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    no price is too big
    if half a smile
    conquers your face

    you know this part right here is amazing, keep it flowing, i loved it and i know he will too


  • Nicolette gold member
    May 20, 2007

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    Yes, to see a smile on a loved one's face, is the most precious gift there is. Amazing how many images and emotions you've packed into the pot of this poem, Diana...loved the idea of a smile "conquering" a face...at last a victory! Loved this one.

    ~ Nicolette


    • Dienush
      May 20, 2007
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      Thanks a lot, Nicolette. I certainly hope he'll agree