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Dear Zach...

I know that I've been mean
And I know that I've been avoiding you lately,
But I still love you
Even though to you
We're just friends

I just wish that I didn't act the way I did
And I'm so sorry for
All the pain I caused you

This is all my fault
And I wish I could make it better
But the thing is I don't know how

I miss you so much that
There are tears coming down as I write this
It's been awhile since we've been together
But I admit that I still
Like you

I sorry that I don't like your
New girlfriend
I guess jealousy was
Waiting to take me

I'm sorry for all the lies I told you
This summer
It was to make you jealous
Because you considered me a good friend
And told me almost everything you
Did with her

I'm sorry that you have me as a friend
And that I still love you
I want to still
Be friends
But my stupidity will get the better of me
And it's more than likely I'll
Just do something stupid

I love you
I miss you
And I regret everything I've done that's
Hurt you
But most of all

I'm sorry
And you won't have to worry
About me again
I'm afraid that us being
Friends is a bad thing
Because I won't get over you

You were so sweet
And I was just mean to you after the breakup
I was so confused and didn't know what to do
Now I wish that life was over because
Being without you is the worst feeling
That I've ever felt

You were the best thing that's ever happened to me...
And I'm miserable without you


Sincerely,
Lynette

Author notes

This is how I feel and I miss this boy with my heart, I'll never get over him no matter what people say. I'm so sorry that I hurt him, and I'm sorry Alex because here I am again obsessing over Zach yet again and I know you're probably tired of it but here's my apology for being so stupid.

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  • immune2love
    May 30, 2007

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    simply amazing.

    your words just flowed gracefully and it seems like the kind of letter that would make cry like a baby if i were zach. i dont really know the situation, but this is amazing. you should show it to him sometime. maybe it wouldnt be such a bad idea.


  • Heart of Darkness
    May 27, 2007

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    It's not stupid, Lynette. I knew all along you missed him, and you know, that's okay. It might be good to send him this poem someday, or tell him how you feel. And if he acts like a butt hole, then let me know and I'll sick my barking and growling Tweak on him, okay?

    Start smiling this summer and just have fun. You're one of my best friends, Lynette, I don't wanna see you hurt anymore.

    And don't appoligize, you have nothing to appoligize for.


    • hopes of sorrow
      May 31, 2007
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      Lol, I think Tweak would break him with one bite and I might show him IDK if I should or when.....I guess we'll just have to see buddy.

      • Heart of Darkness
        May 31, 2007
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        You should show him, he thinks you hate him. But, when you're ready, I'm here if you need to talk to someone, okay?

  • drummerdna
    May 23, 2007

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    Wow...

    It's clear to me and should be to anyone who reads this that you really feel strongly abour this situation...I'm sorry that you are in the position that you are in...your poem is truly touching...

    -Drummerdan-

  • DarkOneShadow
    May 22, 2007

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    Yeah, been there

    Mutual Sorrow, we definetely have... Unrequited love is defining of this piece, I feel sorry for your sorrow, and let you know that it gets better with time, time heals some wounds, but you have to forgive yourself as well as him... That's especially hard considering the circumstances... but best of luck in your endeavours...

    Peace...
    DarkOne


  • Leech Lover
    May 22, 2007

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    Really good

    Darlin I know how you feel I really do expect he hurt me. lol. But I know the pain you feel and as I read your poem I can tell how much this hurts you. I hope you the best. And good luck in ym contest and in LIFE!

  • nothing to do
    May 20, 2007

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    lol, this was really well written, cause i feel sad now! that really sucks. still, it seems like he's someone you need to try and get past. i know just saying is no good, but love is something htat relies on your experience. maybe just tell him you can't be around him for a while, but that you still want to be friends. if you cut yourself off from him for a while, you can start to see life goes on anyways, really good job. i feel for you!

    • hopes of sorrow
      May 22, 2007
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      yeah everyone I've asked about this have told me the same thing, but his girfriend goes to my school and he comes here part time..so it's kinda hard to get rid of him and his friends are my friends! but anyways thanks for the comment and yea....


  • shuvi
    May 20, 2007

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    ow! this was so touching! it happens! u have to fight the feeling urself.. a great write newayz, loadsa luv and cheers, shuvi

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