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Heat

Its too bad that I've been frozen all this time,

and even worse,

I really d i d ' n t c a r e .

All around me,

people were growing happily,

while the natural disasters of my family life,

placed me in an emotional ice-age.

And now,

in a span of two small time frames,

I have thawed.

I am sitting in a puddle of what I think to be,

w i s d o m,

h a p p i n e s s,

l o v e,

and various other unidentified things.

Well,

I am still a little icy,

so can you lay on top of me

and look into my eyes

and smile?

You know you melt me so good.

I've decided that you're perfect.

You could'nt be more

p a s s i o n a t e,

t r u t h f u l,

p l a y f u l,

s e x y,

or

g e n u i n e if you tried.

I'm pretty much liquid now.

There's still a few crystallized flakes of skepticism,

but it seems to me that'll be changing fast.

In a couple more days,

your heat will have turned me to water,

and I'll be pure enough for you to swim around in,

soaking up my mind and body,

and everything they have to offer.

And I'm not even scared,

because I know you'll treat me right.

Oh yeah,

you melt me so good.

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  • Dark Whispers
    May 26, 2007

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    Interesting little poem here, It seems you wrote this from personel experiances which give it more life to it if you ask me. thanks for entering