call me [babe]
call me ~b~e~a~u~t~i~f~u~l~
I need to hear that
p
r
e
t
t
y
l
i
e
[just one last kiss before I die]
hold me [in your arms]
tell me [your sweet sweet lies]
look in my eyes [one last time]
no m.e.r.c.y [just kill me now]
+hit+ me
b|u|l|l|e|t|s to my brain
b♥u♥l♥le♥t to my heart
+bang+ +bang+
I'm g.o.n.e now
[what did you expect?]
Author notes
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1, Razorblade Kisses
A contest entry
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this was short but sweet and i really liked it and the vibe it gave off as you were reading it...great job...keep writing
xXsewn2getherXx
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I liked the way you added the [[what I put in for you to write in the authors comments box]] or what have you. I think it was quite creative. I can feel your/the persons pain throughout this. At the moment my heart is bleeding a thousand bullet wounds as well. Beautifully wrote though. ♥
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whew, hmmmm....
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I feel the start was brillant, intriging with interesting imagination. I feel the end spoiled it though. Was a little rough and too suttle.
Much luck in contest
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Good write here
Within the depths of ones mind the wishes sometimes are held back never reaching others eyes for its my dream -
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This is a really good poem and thank you for entering my contest.
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I Love it!
Have a wonderful day,
FallenPoeticAngel
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Nice write!
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