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Keep me warm at Night

My fingers to your lips,
The feel they bring to my heart,
As you lean closer to me,
As I melt inside and as I fall apart.

You hands reach to my back,
I don't know what to do,
I smile up at you jokingly,
Thinking this isn't true.

But soon I realize,
This is serious,
This isn't a joke,
And I know that I'm not delirious.

I sink to your chest,
I feel your warm embrace,
As you hold me lovingly,
This is the first place.

I look deep into your eyes,
The connection is getting stronger,
I'm getting anxious,
I can't wait any longer.

You lean down and kiss me,
You feel so warm,
I'm lost,
As we begin to transform.

Your kiss is enough,
To keep me warm at night,
And I can't bear to have you,
Out of my sight.

Come to my house,
Come to my room,
Where we'll be lost,
And I'll see you soon.

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  • Jeneralix
    May 28, 2007

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    Aww...this is sooo cute. It's definitely love. This is an amazing poem. I love it! Great job and good luck in the contest!
    <3 Jenerali


  • scullion
    May 27, 2007

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    another well writen piece of magic to my ears the more i read your work the more hooked i become you really are a shining star keep it up love scullion xxx


  • Procrastination
    May 22, 2007
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    You do make me grin! - See. You have proved yourself a wonderful poet. Welldone!
    Goodluck in the contest.
    Emily x


  • poet2angels gold member
    May 20, 2007

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    awwww, a sweet poem of a special feeling...
    TY for entering my contest!

    Lynda