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The End Of Love

We started as friends
Nothing but that
Then my feelings changed
Her's just can't
I played it cool
but she knew
I loved her too

The days went on
she acted strange
She quit talking
an unknown name
She played it cool
but i knew
She loved me too

I mustered the courage
and asked her out
She rejected
she figured out
We acted cool
But we knew
That we love each other too

The end of love
is what that was
I'm still in love
with her i was
the is what you call the end of love

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  • wat2do
    August 27, 2007
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    it was the end of love poem
    so now your talking to me? and i get the hint. dont have to be soo obivious and no its not the hint from this poem! KK

  • wat2do
    August 17, 2007

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    well who ever this is about should feel loved. and its a really good poem. well i hope you read this. but i see that you havent been on if forever. so yah.


  • ashley loves josh
    June 3, 2007

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    i LOVED it

    you r really talented...lucky girl!as for the poem i oved the way i can seem to relate to....it was nicly writin..i cant spell i know...it was beautifuly writen.....GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

  • Phoenix-Flame
    May 19, 2007
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    puuuuuurrrrrrrrrffffffffffffeeeeeeeeeeeeccccccccccccttttttttt! even though this is my poem!!!!