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Blind Eye






A spiritual warrior lays
camaflouged; hidden
in the brushstrokes of
a mundane painting laced
with false promises of better.


Life lived strangled;
wrapped in stress' rags
of chaotic bitterness.
Seams of society pressed
with tension of personal freedom.


Integrity grasped tight
in fists of enlightened spirit
walking paths
with angelic wings spanning
the universe and beyond.


Compassion strands,

the threads stitching
unconditionalism together
in a world raped
by humanity's blind eye.


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  • Ryno
    June 21, 2007

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    First of all... THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for this gift Ya! It is a society write, it is quite hard to understand at first put it is going to be fun to write a poem inspired by this; I really like this write also


    Ryan


    • Celticmoon
      June 21, 2007
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      It's not that hard to understand if you stop looking for the obvious


  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    June 4, 2007

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    wow

    This was beautiful... it was like your words were strokes in a painting - giving us a view of a life and a world long gone. I really loved it.
    I love the last two lines as well... they're so powerful and true.


  • duana
    May 26, 2007
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    oh wow, over my head, and out of my league - brilliant. I can see you are an excellent poet, and a passionate one- too bad my mind works so differently I can't wrap my mind around this. Could also be because I'm extremely tired write now. But anyway, great poem. PS I'm also a pisces.


  • B Chandler
    May 20, 2007

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    The abstraction of man and society as well as the oblivious abstraction of society and spiritalizm's indulgent attribute towards man itself underlines the very core of what's to be undiscovered as every theoretic formulas now lie in way to be only rediscovered once more. Keep penning

  • in-the-twilight
    May 20, 2007

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    Wow... this is AMAZING... Auntie Bel how do you do it? You're an amazing poet and this is society to the core. Amazing job! Rock oN! xoxo Meg


  • Hadji Murad
    May 20, 2007

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    Oh, Dear Lord. This is so blunt and powerful, and beautiful. The words are so lovely and poignant. This is such a note-worthy poem. The emotions are obvious and so powerful.

    Excellent job.


    • Celticmoon
      May 20, 2007
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      how did you get a reward on this poem? I didn't put it in for such

      -scratches her head-


  • TexasMomma
    May 20, 2007

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    very nice writing,very deep feelings and emotions.
    keep up the great work!I love the visions I get when reading this piece.


  • Moons Lunar Angel
    May 20, 2007

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    WOw um speechless. Wow This is top of the top not everyone will understand it. It's just wow. Where did this come from?????? so much wisdom and insight you hold. This piece is definitely one of my favs.
    Love Lil (still in awe)

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