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We will not be forgotten

A familiar scent upon the chill, night air.
Freshly cut oak, still oozing sap.
Presumably sharpened for a sinister purpose.
They have found where we lair.
But, they make a small mistake,
one which will cost them their lives.
They come for us, for me,
to drive the sharpened stake into our cold, dead hearts,
But; they come after the sun has set.
It shall be the last mistake they have ever,
or will ever, make.

I send an unspoken call
into the coming darkness;
a call to my children,
a call to have some fun.
They must not be allowed to come,
To find my lair,
or to harm the one who still sleeps,
inside her fresh tomb.
She is young in the ways of the night yet.
What shall happen this eve,
Is to protect her,
Until she is ready.
Until she is strong enough.
I lean over her still form,
And place a kiss upon her brow.

 

    Do not fear, my dove. 

     I shall return, and you shall be safe.

 

With that, I am gone.

I feel the others arriving with me,

following the scent of the oaken stakes.

I can feel their fury upon the air.

Has nothing been learned of our kind?

What arrogance is it to think,

that they can defeat us, after the sun has set?

 

And now, they are stopming clumsily through the woods,

Less than a mile from our den.

My daughters appear at my side.

 

     Father? What shall we do?

 

I smile.

What shall we do, indeed?

 

    Are you not hungry, my darlings?

 

At my words, they get evil little grins.

I instruct them to surround the mortals

from all sides, and from behind.

I stand, and I watch. I allow my children

to have their moment of fun.

I smell the mortals emotions.

At first, they are angry,

they wish to stab,

to burn and decapitate.

Turn us to ashes before we raise

from our cold tombs.

And then, they become afraid.

Something is following them.

Impossible! The sun has only just set.

Terror flows within their breast.

I close my eyes in satisfaction

as I feel the ebb and flow of their fear;

thick as blood itself in the air.

Screams begin to rend the night. 

Torches are extinguished in an unholy breeze.

Bodies twisted and shattered thump  to the ground;

lifeless husks spraying a crimson fountain

high into the air, washing acros others standing near.

I smeel the coppery taint fill the air 

as their life essence is wantonly spilled.

The horror transcends anything

mortal senses will ever appreciete.

Heads snapped from mortal necks

like macabre dandelions in a childs hands.

Arms and legs torn asunder

from an Immortals fury.

Mortal hearts thundering a tune

that is music to my ears,

a melody to the symphany of the night.

I dance, with eyes closed, to the sweet crescendo of death

that is happening all around me.

I waltz through a scene from nightmare;

Trees soaked with dark stains,

dripping from the leaves of nearby wildflowers.

 

All too suddenly,

the vengeance is total.

Nothing is left here, alive.

My daughters are now gone,

but yet I linger through a fresh graveyard.

I find the leader of the mob by wan torchlight.

Laying broken and bent upon the bare ground,

a pool of his own blood soaking into the earth.

I pry from his fingers the stake.

With a morbid, yet serene smile,
I drive the stake through his heart.

I stand over him, and begin to laugh.

A haunting sound that will drift through the night,

to where this simpleton came from.

A chill warning to those left behind.

 I then kneel next to his corpse, 

and I begin to speak, to unhearing ears.

 

    Poetic justice, my friend. 

 

Like a breeze in the silence of night,

I leave this ravaged little path.

Upon my return to my den,

I notice my darling one has arisen.

Her hand goes to her mouth in shock,

seeing me covered in crimson fluid.

I do not answer her,

only to state that it is indeed time.

We must find a new den,

we will not be welcome in these parts for a long time.

We will not be welcome,

but we will not be forgotten either.  

 

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WARNING: Graphic. Not for the faint of heart. If you do not like violence, etc, please do not read.

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  • Ninth-Poet
    June 18, 2007

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    Creatively refreshing!

    This is a good piece of literature from the dark side of the light. The imagery was quite quenchable while gradually blending strong etched images into the mix. Eventhough your piece had a few evident spelling, your text has a very flowy piece of literature.

    -Keep the ink flowing!
    -Good luck in the contest!

    -Sage of the east


  • Fallen Archangel
    June 16, 2007

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    I do love a good vampire tale.

    And this one definetly takes into account alot of what a vampire is during a time of danger and hunger.

    I liked it.

    good job and good luck in my contest.

    --Lucian Adonis


  • afroqban
    June 12, 2007
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    I had to read this twice, it was that good. This is way better than t.v. very good job here

  • heartofpainfultears
    June 8, 2007
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    wonderful work i love this


  • crystallynnbradford
    June 6, 2007

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    I love this piece it's so dark and intriguing.....mawhaha. i love vampire poems with I passion and this one was so descriptive and so...evil, in a lack of a more complex adjective. Adding the voilence really showed what some of them were about...vampires aren't supposed to be "cutesy" like hello kitty, but they sometimes tend to have a softer side then they let others believe and the imagery was amazing


  • Death4Hire13
    May 31, 2007

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    I liked this. It made me smile in a sadistic sort of way. Usually I abhorr violence, but when it comes to vampires, I don't know why, but no matter what it always makes me smile. Well written, but for a couple of mistakes. This piece flowed well. I don't know why, but this piece didn't scare me. It's not really things like this that scare me. Not death, but aliens. Just the thought can make me stay up all night. Good luck in my contest.


  • WanderingCyclone
    May 30, 2007
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    Nice vampire tale, not quite terrifying though. Good work regardless. Good luck.


  • thelovesongwriter
    May 27, 2007
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    please read my rules, too long...but good poem anyways.


  • Jasmine Minx
    May 27, 2007

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    EEK!! ok you have surpassed it what i thought. If you would allow me to be i would ask if you could teach me how to write like you.

    Patty Feasel

  • Donkaidi
    May 24, 2007

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    WOW

    This was a well orgainized write. I loved it. And as I can picture in my minds eye what my eyes read it was scary enough to hold my interest to the very end.

    Thank you for a great write.

    ~kneels to the master~

  • heartofpainfultears
    May 20, 2007
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    awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great write very good write


  • Poetdontknowit
    May 20, 2007

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    Pretty wild!!!!!!!!

    Man, have you got a Stephen King imagination ,or what? lol You are one awesome writer. keep em coming!!!!!!!!!! The imagery king!!!!!!! I curtsy.
    POETDONTKNOWIT


  • Dalaney gold member
    May 20, 2007

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    gee...this is eerie, dark, still beautiful
    in a more savage genre. I like it. You
    have a wonderful imagination, and you inspire
    me even more to use mine....Love, Lane


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    May 20, 2007

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    this is amazing, i loved every word of this poem you did a bangin job on this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • LordVampirEternal
    May 19, 2007

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    A well woven tale the darkness can be all concuming and so can those that dwell in it, a very vivid write my friend bravo

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