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Blinded Light

It is night
You awaken
A world comes to life

I hear your voice
I feel your touch

Purple skies
And a silver moon
Will I find you?

I see you in the distance
A dark figure
A distant dream

The senses
Guide me
The only truth
Will I find you?

Through the forest
The trees look like dark spirits
Coming from the earth
I still go to you

In search
Of you
Will I find you?

The darkness deepens
I’m not in search of light
But of a different source
Can I still find you?

With no feeling
No voices
And no sight
I will follow you

Through the blackness
I still go
I focus on just you

The times I heard your voice
Saw your eyes
And touched your hand
Tasted your lips
Will I find you?

Author notes

just radomly during civics class i wrote this.

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  • intanglio2ring
    May 21, 2007

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    Most enjoyable - we often search and search hoping to find the love we so desire - you've described the continuous journey we all strive to obtain!
    Thanks for your entry into my contest & Good Luck!
    Tang