As the darkness comes to fall,
The valleys open up a firey wall.
Light shining from depths of hell,
Came close enough for all who fell.
She's hidden within the the mysteries blaze,
A vision formed by evils ways.
Shaken down by all around,
Fire escapes a hellish mound.
A beauty of the sinners face,
A smile for one who fits her taste.
She reaches for the sinful man,
Who has deserted his wedding band.
She inhales his devious ways,
Enticing him, she's brazen today.
Adulterer, a man who fits her,
A lustful fantasy,a day of conquer.
In the midst of her firey hour,
He leaves his wife, he becomes her follower.
He waits the moment, she erupts,
Settling at the bottom, he fathoms going up.
Climbing the hillside of such an incredible blaze,
He seeks the lips of temptations paste.
Sealed within her mighty grip,
His hands snug, feet locked, never will he slip.
As he falls into, the sinful taste of this beauty,
The face of this hilltop, he finds security.
Shake,
Rumble,
Rocks begin to tumble.
Crack,
Shatter,
Her love was all that mattered.
Explosion overturned,
The hilltop burned.
Evilness escapes as the ashes fall around,
The faces of the dead, gathered upon broken ground.
Too many to run from, to many gathered here,
Drawn in by the number, he was shaking with fear.
His wife walked through, the window of the blaze,
A smirk upon her face...
As she held the remains in her grasp,
A vision taunting, she laughs.
Upon his knees he fell,
Demons grabbed him by his arms, dragging him to hell.
The hilltop glowing, as they slipped into the hole,
Death came by easily, for the man who had no control.
Author notes
Hmm contest purposes only lol.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Dark Poerty by ennovy.
550 points, ended May 20, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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interesting write
may be for a contest, but sounds like many feelings here traveling someplace. thanks for sharing.
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Yes alot of emotions came out in this right, think you know me huh? So far so good. Thanks for your kind words I appreciate your loyality in reading,
much love
victoria
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wow. this is incredible. i knew you would have a knack for dark boetry, its all about imagination, understanding what is dark and expressing it. somepeople just go for shock value, you truely understand what scary is. awsome job, i love it, expecially the middle part it adds volumes to the profoundity of this piece. keep up the amazing work, your eerie neighborhood mystery man.
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visual brain gravy
Greek mythology comes to mind. Adam and eve kind of story touch this and ye shall be punished.Love is sacred though and people that abouse it should be punished. I hope some of this makes sense to you.
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OOh I loved this, the steamy temptress that breaks down a mans reserve of faith and piety. So well described and the flow is wonderful. Good luck in this contest. Love, C
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Unique Thoughts and Views
on the picture, and very well written with some nice rhyming...thank you for entering my contest..novy
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