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Is it love?

When im in a bad mood and you come through the door
its like the problem is just wiped away
i have never felt like this before
with your smile it makes my day.

its so hard and i know you think so too
when people tell us to move on
i dont know how many times i said it was just between me and you
but it seems that time doesnt go very long.

When your not here
you are all thats on my mind
when you dont call its my fear
its not that your unkind.

people tell me im in falling for you
but i try not to get close
most guys said they were too
but just hurt me like the most.




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do i really have to say anymore?lol\slipknot option 10

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    this was a beautiful write
    deep with emotion that could be felt
    im sure many people can relate to this
    well done and best of luck


  • Dark Whispers
    May 26, 2007

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    Many people can relate to this,because everybody deals with this fear sometime or another. thanks for entering


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    May 22, 2007

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    These are very real fears and feelings that we all have had to deal with at one time or another. Thanks for entering and good luck.

    Jeannie