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The Black Tangled Forest



I am not aware why I came here
Or where I was before
If there was a before
I only know this dark forest
Dense thickness entwining limbs
There is a way through
Yet still I search

I am watched by a million eyes
Coldly unmoved at my unease
Mile after mile I tramp onward
Yet circling always around
I do not lack courage for the task
My need is for a strong guide
A light to remind me I am free

Through the dark a silvern tendril reaches
Seeking the life force within me
It is empathy and recognition
A being equal to myself
Someone I knew before time itself
A voice as pure as the first breeze
Calls out so I sing to her

We know the way, we always knew
As one we are the way, the truth and the life
Separate we falter, together we fly
We draw each other onward
A path unknown to one is known by the other
Until we rise above the trees
And infuse with the universe…




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Carol is a pool of light.

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  • Night Hope gold member
    May 26, 2007
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    Update ~ message from shewolfnative:

    "I would like every one of these poems on my domain site....would they please each contact me so I can add them there on my professional site."


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    May 20, 2007

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    Oh my goodness, this is beatuiful and such a tribute...yes, we are on the same path...at one with the Mother...and trying hard to be as creative as she...

  • Night Hope gold member
    May 19, 2007

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    "We know the way, we always knew
    As one we are the way, the truth and the life
    Separate we falter, together we fly
    We draw each other onward
    A path unknown to one is known by the other
    Until we rise above the trees
    And infuse with the universe…"

    Yes, she is a pool of light. She is an unending source of guidance, inspiration, courage & truth. This is a beautiful tribute to one of my dearest friends. Thank you for honoring her so well by entering this contest. Good luck, Poet. Wanda

  • dillpickle62
    May 19, 2007
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    Whoa!

    This is more then just beautiful, this is a Masterpiece!

  • Chris Stienstra
    May 19, 2007

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    very good

    I enjoyed reading this. In fact, I read through a few times. Each time, more of the picture unfolds.
    Thanks
    Chris

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