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New, Story, Part three: The Kings Message.

Goth quickly grabed the big gold lion knocker and let it fall with a loud booming sound. A small servent opened the door, the room behind the door was big, very colorful, and kinda odd for a king, it was midnight blue, and hot pink colors, with a big yello covered bed, green curtains, a closet that was opened to revile, many different colored close, THe King was sitting in a white chair with cat curled in his lap
"Goth, come in, come in. Nice to see you again. Harlly you can go now." Harlly quickly left closing the door behind her
"Sir, you wanted to see me." Goth said this shyly, looking at the odd look on the kings face she knew is was something dangourus, or something he didn't want to say.
"Yes, Sir Prensten told me about your wonderful preformance, I want you to have a month before going about what im gonna tell you to do. There is different realms, or world, But it takes a very powerful Chill to open the portals, I think you'll have enough power to do this." THe king was not finished,b ut Goth could tell he was thinking how to put the next part.
"Sir, I don't know where these portals are, and if I did, How would I know how to open them, and how to move to another Realm." Goth said this while looking at the strange cat sitting on the kings lap
"All you have to do is search for the power, say the realm's name, and wait, if you don't have the ower nothing will happen, if you have the power the portal will glow, and there is one portal on every realm, the portal for our realm is in the basemwnt of this castle." Goth was amazed the cat was talking to her as if talking was natural
"This is Elrod, a dragon riding cat, who's master died a few years back, and no one want a cat to ride with, so i keep him close." the King siad petting the small cat fondley.
"I would love to ride with a cat." Goth said picking up the brown tabby cat.
"Lets get back to your mission." The king said taking Elrod and putting him is a small animal carrier
"THe realm you need to go to is, Gandra, And like Elrod said the portal is in our basment, and first you need to have a month of classes to get to know people, and get a small group to go with you."
"Yes Sir, Harlly we are leaving now." Harly opened the door and escorted Goth back to her bedroom.

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  • JoyfulWriter
    May 20, 2007

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    This is coming along rather wonderfully...so amazing how you can write so well and let the story flourish with awesome detail....keep up the wonderful work...smiles, Terry