Your brown eyes were so paralyzing,
stopped dead in my tracks by you.
Whispering words so tantalizing,
irresistable, was all I knew.
Hearts melted with each loving word,
threw caution to the wind that night.
Passionate fantasy, sighing heard,
quivering with delicious delight.
Lost inibitions, no pretenses,
opening up to new found treasures.
Velvet touches arouse the senses,
submit to one anothers pleasures.
Love knew no limits between us two,
both searching for the ultimate peak.
You pleasing me and me pleasings you
leaving us satisfied and weak.
It all started with one little glance,
love seen in brown eyes that night.
Fueled by passion we began to dance,
that's all it took for love to ignite.
In a list
A contest entry
- Romantic Love Poems Contest by Ethereal One.
900 points, ended May 29, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A sensual yet not erotic love poem. Christians can write about love. In fact we can write truthfully about love because we know TRUE LOVE, AGAPE LOVE.
Spelling on 9th line, 2nd word inhibition (oversight I know)
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Thank you
Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate your nice comment. You take care. Sandy
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WOW... I think the passion in which created this poem is amazing. The breath taking imagery carries the reader away with such fire. You really have the ability to capture the reader and leave them only wanting for more.... I love the way in which you write and how this poem feels.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest you entered but I am sure you will do very very well in it.
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Great Comment Edward
Hello, Your commnt was wonderful and a pleasure to read my dear friend. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Hope all is well with you. You take care and I send you many hugs and smiles. Bye Bye Sandy 
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Oh wow, what a heart warmer This was so enjoyable to read...I knew I liked it already from the first stanza Excellent flow too, well done!
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Hello Manty
Good Morning. Your comment was lovely and a pleasure to read this morning. A poem dear to my heart. You have a wonderful day. Sandy 
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excellent
Beautiful Sandy, Makes one want to be lost forever, so spontenous and unconditional. Just to be lost in the moment caution thrown to the wind. Wonderful imagery creating, mystical sceen in the mind. Great Job
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Wonderful Comment!!!!!
Good morning June. Your comment was lovely as always. Yes sometimes we do get lost in the moment.
Hoipe all is well with you. Take care, Sandy
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I agree, this would be great as a song... beautifully scribed with a fitting image...
All the best this evenin'
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Lovely Comment
Good Morning, Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. Your comment was lovely and appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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This would be excellent as a song..
It's very like the Finnish band H.I.M. -
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Nice Comment
Good Morning, Thank you for the nice comment. Yes it may make a nice song. It is a song in my heart. Thank you for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment. Take care, Sandy
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romantic and passionate
Your words take the reader into this sensual and romantic meeting that you write about in this poem. I felt like I was there witnessing this love ignite. You have to watch out for those brown eyes.
Thank you for entering this contest, and good luck!
Aurora 2012
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Thank You
Your Comment was lovely and appreciated. Sandy
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Very touching
I wish I would find a love like this....guess I'm too old now; but it brought back delicious memories. Thank you!
Return the favor?
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Lovely Comment
Good Morning, We are never to old. We can always dream too. Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate your nice comment. You take care, Sandy
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Excellent
It all started with one little glance,
love seen in brown eyes that night.
Fueled by passion we began to dance,
that's all it took for love to ignite.
Love the tone and flow of this writing
Rick
. Rewarded 4
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Wonderful Comment
Good Morning Rick, It is always nice to hear from you. You are the master of romantic poems. I hope all is well with you. You have a wonderful day.
Sandy
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i love it. its sort of like love at first sight. not something that i belive in, but still beautiful.
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Great Comment!!!
Good Morning, I want to thank you for stopping by my poem and reading. I appreciate your nice comment. You take care, Sandy
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