Honey,
you're everything to me;
The sun, the stars even the sea
When I was drowning
you kept me afloat
Now when I'm soaring
you are my wings,
The ground I stand on
-the air I breathe.
Honey,
You're flawless, for every imperfection
I own-
You make up for all of them.
You remove my insecurities...
With you I'm something.
Honey,
In my eyes the sun only
shines on you
- for you.
I see all of this && more in your
bright green eyes.
Honey,
your eyes say it all,
your eyes that I can get lost in
your eyes, your bright green eyes
are what I live my life by.
Honey,
one day I'll find a way to show you
I'll find a way to tell you
I'll find a way...
Author notes
Green eyes is by Coldplay
I used option 1 =]
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A contest entry
- 8 options of madness by McFairy.
2000 points, ended June 2, 2007, 44 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WOW this is excellent, it's full of emotion and a deep love for someone.
I had never herd that song before, it's not to bad, and i checked it out, and you did a great job, i also love that you added Honey to your piece.
This really got better and better as it went on.
I loved the second stanza, very well done and good luck in the contest!!!!!!!
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Awwww! This Is Lovely
Mwah
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This is absolutely fantastic, I love it, I just adore love poems, the one thing I am not happy with though is the third stanza with the && thing going on, just dont like it. But I love the way you put "honey" into it like the song, I'm very pleased with this.
***Strangeangel***
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