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Moonlight Calling

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A brilliant moon smiling down
pervading my senses
bringing you to me
Without touching
I can feel you
Our souls meeting
in the starlit night
Needing nothing else
except our existence

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  • Grey Mouser
    May 31, 2007

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    Wonderfully romantic feel to this piece. The powerful feeling of longing that is inspired here, sends the mind on a journey of exploration of the senses. Very well done and thank you for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser

  • Puppydog gold member
    May 25, 2007

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    SO LOVELY AND SWEET!

    When two hearts connect one can feel the other even if they are far apart. This is such a beautiful and tender poem.


  • Lonewolf2008 gold member
    May 21, 2007
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    Sweet and lovely

    nights are like that, esp if the moon is bright and lots of stars. touching.

  • Whoochi gold member
    May 20, 2007

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    How true how true when you have that soulmate, nothing else exists or needs to exist...felt the longing and desire in this! well done...Best of luck!