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Velvet Words

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Your words are like velvet
caressing the soul
their beauty flowing
from a beautiful heart

You write of love with
great knowledge
Making the reader long
to relive wonderful memories

My mind has been touched
many times with your words
easing the storms and
bringing me to a tranquil place






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  • Pimpindelight gold member
    June 1, 2007

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    I am catching my breath after that poem My mind is soulful in music.I'm inspired to write a poem.THANKS!!!10


  • Nature Song silver member
    May 19, 2007
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    'Your words are like velvet
    caressing the soul
    their beauty flowing
    from a beautiful heart'

    The slighest touch of her pen is like velvet, caressing each readers soul. Impressive stanza. The beauty that flows from her heart! Good luck in the contest. ~Sie


  • Night Hope gold member
    May 19, 2007

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    "My mind has been touched
    many times with your words
    easing the storms and
    bringing me to a tranquil place"

    If I have done anything, said anything, written anything to help ease any storm you've encountered, then I am most humbled, grateful & pleased, my Friend...This is a lovely & touching piece, my Sister...Thank you for penning such a soft & tranquil piece with me in mind...Good luck in the contest, Sweetie... Wanda


  • Peteskid gold member
    May 19, 2007
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    velvet words indeed

    this soft and gentle poem is a wonderful tribute to the author. These words here seem to sigh in their respect and appreciation for the kindness and comfort this writer has found. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK


  • Laura
    May 19, 2007

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    ohhhh i say this is utterly beautiful the imagery is amazing i love it totally well done and good luck in the contest xxx

  • ever1der gold member
    May 19, 2007

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    this is wonderful. Sometimes we are deeply touched by someone's words and your writing shows that. Lots of feeling in few words.

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