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i want to be hers

eyes of like the pale blue sky
after a summmer morning storm
grey clouds are taken over by the blue
like the offshoots of grey i see in her eyes
a smile that will make anyone grin along with her
the ability to pierce right through me
and get to what is troubling me
with curls and ringlets she
lays to waste my stress filled day
all she has to do is hold me and say
"leave your worries for another day"
she can sooth my easily angered mood
with just a touch of her silken hand
she erases it and melts it away with the
special way she says "i love you"
and all she ever asks is for forever with me
and nothing i can do
is better
or higher
or of more import
than simply being hers

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  • THeLasTBeAT
    May 22, 2007
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    It brings a smile to my face everyday. Thank you...


  • TacetFiat
    May 19, 2007
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    aww it's very, very sweet!!