the man i love
we met in a place of love and acceptance.
i saw your pain, saw your tears
let me take your tears on my lips
let me take your pain to my heart
let me show you of love
let me give you my heart for refuge
my arms shall hold you and keep you safe
my lips will kiss you and reassure you
these gifts i offer to bring comfort to you
i love this man man
for, i know his heart is good and pure.
needing love as all do i offer you love and acceptance for you are precious in the universe
my heart is storng and offers you its protection
love is yours as a gift and know that you are loved and always will have my affections.
i know of greatness in you and look to the day that you find wing and soar free as the beautiful person you are.
Author notes
for someone very special, i care about
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 9 of 9
-
This is so very beautiful. The imagery and metaphor is breath-taking, and your word choice is flawless. Lovely job!
-
Very loving, very encouraging, a true friend's words and written beautifully.
-
let me take your tears on my lips
let me take your pain to my heart
let me show you of love
let me give you my heart for refuge
these lines are so moving...I can feel the comfort in the words as I read them. I have a type of motherly nature and I know how it feels to want to help someone, to bring them back from being numb. This was such a joy to read, thank you very much for sharing, I will be looking for more...
-
Oh my! What a fantastic write
This is an offer no woman can refuse and I am certain that she won't
I love the way you described a 'safe haven' for this lady - letting her know that you absolutely adore her and will protect her with everything you are!
It's given me a warm fuzzy feeling inside and I commend both you and her on this beautiful find that they two of you have come across
-
Such tender and caring words you have penned here. Love has no boundries..only the wind that makes one soar to higher levels. You have portrayed this well. Embraced another within your words which spilled forth from your heart. Thank you for sharing such untainted love. Dawn
-
How wonderful for someone to read the words that you have written for them. I know this, because I have felt them in my heart. The ability to care so freely is truly what love is all about. Wonderfully done.
Much love always,
Soulful Woman
-
you are a strong and wonderful person. In you, and others, I confide. you have done so much for me, and i thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Much Love,
Folken
-
this is lovely. i like the perspective here. this is a beautiful tribute. the caring and devotion is so evident. wonderful write!
-
The purity of true and honest uninhibited love shines forth in your words. Bringing so much hope to this world. I loved this poem and I love all it stands for. beautiful my sweet and brave Knight!
Love you...
Az
Adding your comment:
1 - 9 of 9
