i'm letting it simmer, letting the feeling of it
roll over my tongue like lemonade on a hot, hot day.
i'm testing it, adding sugar and taking it away,
i want to see if its worth it to care so much about you.
so can you tell me, am i foolish?
i don't want to be stuck on you if it's useless.
i don't need another crack in my radiator,
another reason to hate more days of the year because
they made me so incomparably happy to everything else.
i always remember these things so clearly, those looks
and smiles and goofy laughs and the presence of
dimples on cheeks, the texture of hair, and a sort of
electric current passed from a little touch that
i wish was more, i've been down this road before,
of sweet tooths and buying you lunch, and it ends up
the same, always messing up my routines.
you stole a cookie from my cookie jar, and i
want it back.
tell me what you think;
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This so relates to my own life...whether to love someone who you just can't see loving you back...is it worth it? Even if I can never have you, is it worth it?
Brilliant.
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i don't need another crack in my radiator,
another reason to hate more days of the year because
they made me so incomparably happy to everything else.
i always remember these things so clearly, those looks
and smiles and goofy laughs and the presence of
dimples on cheeks, the texture of hair, and a sort of
electric current passed from a little touch that
i wish was more, i've been down this road before,
of sweet tooths and buying you lunch, and it ends up
the same, always messing up my routines.
you stole a cookie from my cookie jar, and i
want it back.
i sayyy, this is the best three fourths of the poem. and all together it's just great, i like it. i dont really know what else to say but that this part makes me happy.



