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What You See!

Lookin' around fields so green,
A Sight so obscene.
Toxins rise from the ground,
Putrid poison from every deserted mound.

Some have looked to me for help, guidance, advice
Never thought twice
About what goes on behind dizzied eyes
Diseased lies.

Truth's got the cure
And I'm asking for more!

Been wondering about the sanity of individuality.
We're only ever binded by the formality of reality.
Now you know what you hear isn't me.
Can't even begin to define me through what you see!

So I was your slave. Yours, and Yours too!
Now I think it's about time to thank the few!
I'll just blow a kiss,
'cause it's the illusions I miss!

Faces so cute
So quickly dilute
Once they refute.

Once I thought phantoms were so pure,
Truth had the cure...
And I only want more!

Been wondering about the sanity I expressed through individuality.
I've been bound by formalities and false realities!
Now you know what you heard was never going to be me!
It's absurd that you thought you could judge me through what you see!

Hurt and outcast by the majority of mind,
Fall, stumble, hit the wall- The decrepit and blind!
Why let manners get in the way of aggression?
Why be slowed by your fruitless digression?!

Hate me, hurt me, bite me.
Make me bleed faster than this oil-spilt sea!

Hugs for All.
Tears for few.
Could just force you to fall,
Why waste my time on you?!

I've less sanity than I do individuality,
You've no formality and no capacity for reality-
What you hear doesn't dictate me.
Don't base your opinions on what you see!

Fuck This, Fuck That, Fuck The World, Amen!
Close my eyes count to ten.
Have you and yours lies died?
No? At least I tried!

Looking through what I believe and know,
Degredation will follow wherever I go,
So long as I'm the pawn against the flow!

Isolate my ideals, I'll no longer be afraid.
So this is how it feels, shining cold blade!
As my blood congeals I will not fade!

No more sanity, only my individuality!
No more formality. This is my reality!
What you hear pretends to dictate me...
But I can't even be explained by What YOU See!

Ask Them.
Ask them why I'm breaking.
Ask Them.
Ask them why they're faking.

Mask Them.
Mask your eyes.
Mask Them.
Mask your world of lies.

I don't wear a disguise!
You're the ones who strives to hypnotize!
I don't wear a disguise!
These are greetings, not goodbyes!

Devils fall from heaven and Angels crawl from hell!
Where did I come from?
Though speculated by some...
Only Time Will Tell!

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I take pride in this one most of all so far.

A contest entry

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  • Emo Cowboy14
    May 23, 2007
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    OMG I LOVE IT. ITS REALY REALY GOOOD. thanks so much for entering into my contest.


    • XChrisUnknownX
      May 25, 2007
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      Heh...

      Always a pleasure, I'd written it about a week back, and when I went to see which contest it'd fit into best, I decided on yours.


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    May 19, 2007

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    WOW. that was a really wonderful poem. i enjoyed it even though it was long, it was till teriffic, i can see that u put in a lot of emotion in this one, great job keep up the awesome work!


    • XChrisUnknownX
      May 19, 2007
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      Thanks.

      This is really one of the better ones in my own opinion. Glad for the feedback.