I'll just sleep on it
drown it all away,
with everything else
These memories will decline and decay
I'll forget everything I've ever known,
these old lies will become a twisted mess of nothingness
All the pain and angush will disappear
There are so many things that I won't miss
It's time to stop thinking the world will change
I lay here, trying hard to stay awake
I can't do this, I still love you and I don't want to forget,
what a mistake
Copyright {c} 2007 Hannah Duffin {All Rights Reserved}
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"It's only when we've lost everything that we're free to do anything." Here I am resorting to another quote... It's just that your work shows great wisdom. You have a well-rounded understanding of your feelings. Well done. Great work.
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I love quotes, they're so awesome and they teach us so much about life. Thanks for the comment and applause. I'm glad you liked it.
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A few spelling errors....I know, I am a witch for mentioning, I try not to...but...I can't help it!!!!
I love this one. Memories can be sooo bittersweet. It's nice to have them as they offer comfort when there is none to be found and can take us back to a happy time...then they fade and we are struck yet again with the painful knowledge that they are, in fact, mere memories....and that hurts. Really nice job here.
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thanks, I love when ppl critisise me and correct my grammar! i do it too, and I'm rly ely ely happy that you liked it
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