The pain runs deep,
A river gushing out tears and blood,
The hate strikes hard,
Lightning streaked with knives and screams,
The razor speaks softly,
Whispers of lies and suicide,
The voices shriek mericlessly,
Push me towards the edge,
Each breath brings more life,
And with more life brings more pain,
With pain comes reality,
Reality laced with torture,
Torture soaked in bittersweet love,
Bittersweet love that makes me bleed,
Blood that makes me cry,
Tears that make me weak,
Weakness that makes me sick,
Sickness that makes me crazy,
Insanity that makes them stare,
Stares that silence my cries,
Silence that freezes the soul,
Frostbitten and broken,
I am dead.
Author notes
Have you ever written one of those 'I don't care how it comes out so I'll just write' moments? This was a product. Help on how to improve? <3
A contest entry
- biggest contest in allpoetry history! (i hope) need 1,000 entries!! by Gasp.
1300 points, ended July 11, 2007, 638 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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i've tried to write something like this before, turned out horrible. you on the other hand did a fantastic job with it. I really lov this.
~!~keep writing~!~
~gasp~
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