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Song of Sweetness - Video Slam

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She came to me
by Spirit’s guidance sent
a gift of grace
one of the gentle kind

Her presence
resonating in
my heart’s abode

with wakeful patience
healing
she bestowed

Her touch
is one
that knows
no selfish will

By Spirit’s vastness
is her soul inspired
allowing things
to be
as they should be

controlling fate
has never crossed her mind

For she is
Wisdom’s gift
enlightening
my flame

a healing balm
upon my bleeding heart

a song of sweetness
that my soul imbibes

with tenderness
and utter loving care

Oh Mother
Dear One
Kindness Incarnate

today
I sing your praise
with humble voice
                 

Author notes

watch the video :
http://s247.photobucket.com/albums/gg123/poetmaa/?action=view¤t=songofsweetness.flv


my constantly updated video-poetry :
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3791503


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in loving tribute to carol aka shewolfnative http://allpoetry.com/shewolfnative

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mirror-painting "wholehearted" by maa

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    January 14, 2008

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    I am so humbled, dear heart. That I could embody the sweet spirit you project. I *lvoe* you and thank you for the painting. It is in the book and I am so honored to find msyelf there.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 9, 2007

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    Beautiful

    A wonderful piece displayed upon this poetic page of your heart nice tribute, your words weave wonderous...peace..thanks for sharing..........


  • Providence
    June 6, 2007

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    As always you've once again created a masterful piece of work, the feelings are very powerful, yet it is crafted in a soft and gentle voice. Very much captures the spirit of the poet.

    Bravo!
    Marianne


  • Night Hope gold member
    May 26, 2007

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    Update ~ message from shewolfnative:

    "I would like every one of these poems on my domain site....would they please each contact me so I can add them there on my professional site."


  • penman gold member
    May 26, 2007
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    Beautiful

    Such a truly touching poem honoring a great poet. Good luck in the contest.


    • maa gold member
      May 26, 2007
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      thank you so much for your visit, dear penman ... and for the clapping bunnies ...

      maa


  • cherche -d -ame
    May 22, 2007

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    these words of gratitude and grace come from a person as special as the one that the poem is dedicated to. We all are blessed by the existence of the both of youthank you for being "YOU"
    always much love ma chere
    xoxoxoxoxo
    reenie


  • WolfHeart
    May 20, 2007

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    Oh, beautiful!

    This is so sweet and unaffected. What a lovely tribute to shewolfnative, one of my fave people. You always have a way of offering praise and love through your words. I so enjoyed reading this tribute.

    hugs Wolfie

  • dillpickle62
    May 19, 2007
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    Perfect

    Wonderful poem for a wonderful Poet.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    May 19, 2007
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    Ohhhhhhhhhh, the pic came up this time....wow, does it ever look pretty on here.... ty for using it.

  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    May 19, 2007
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    Oh my goodness, I donto know why this all trips my heart so, but it does.. Your words, your hornor for me, my...how beautiful it is..... ty dear friend and I hope you got your gift.

    • maa gold member
      May 19, 2007
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      dear carol,
      synchronicity ?
      your gift arrived only minutes after I had finished my poem for you ...
      the flowers already feel at home here ...
      I am so happy about your present ...
      thank you !!!

      marion

  • Night Hope gold member
    May 19, 2007
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    "Her presence
    resonating in
    my heart’s abode

    with wakeful patience
    healing
    she bestowed"



    "a healing balm
    upon my bleeding heart

    a song of sweetness
    that my soul imbibes"

    Ahhh, this is a lovely, loving tribute, Marion...I was especially touched by these lines, as I could see nothing but glimmering Truth within them...I remember the occurrence you speak of, when you recognized her as Mother, & how deeply moved she was at your emotional outpouring of Love...You held a contest that allowed me to pay tribute to the beautiful Being that she is, as well...She inspires me to write from an even deeper level than I had before, from a place of clarity & peace...She also has honored me with a fishscale piece that I treasure...She is a sage, an artisan, a nurturer, a tender of Souls...I love her dearly & call her Sister...Thank you for honoring her Spirit so well, my Friend...Good luck in the contest, Sweetie... Wanda


    • maa gold member
      May 19, 2007
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      thank you for your generous words of appreciation, dear wanda ...

      marion


  • MargaretG
    May 19, 2007

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    Beautiful and emotive verse dear one, reflecting your own nature. Sometimes we meet a person who resonates with a clear tone, and it is magical when it happens. It is no one's fault if it does not. Lovely work, best of luck with it!


    • maa gold member
      May 19, 2007
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      thank you so very much, dear margaret ...
      your words are truly appreciated ...

      maroion

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