Encased within my being,
the solace of your world;
the strand between, as if of gold,
entwined, within my world~
Intrigued with her
Your being there
The casual glances
The longing stares~
Brought visions of grandeur;
Of hopes; of dreams
Two rivers running~
Through lucid dreams
The time, it passed quickly
Unraveling in wind
Journeys traveling
That will remain~
forever bright, from within, the memory of your name
Vivid dreams come hither now,
and build for me a place to vow;
forever dear, forever bright
I will hold you in~
My Lucid Sight
A contest entry
- Pay it Forward! Picture Inspired by iamlost.
600 points, ended June 5, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Your title and everything was great for this photo. I love how you bring two souls together through "lucid sight". The imagery of "gold entwined", "two rivers running" and others were very nice. I found your poem to be spiritual, like two souls meeting in their dreams, in an astral plane, but not in our world;
"The time, it passed quickly
Unraveling in wind
Journeys traveling
That will remain~;"
and;
"Vivid dreams come hither now,
and build for me a place to vow;
forever dear, forever bright
I will hold you in~"
This, to me, represented the lovely merging of two spirits within a lucid dream.
Best wishes in the contest. You should win for this one!
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What an inspiring and beautiful poem you have created! I love everything you have placed in this, the images and ideas. Good luck in the contest!
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