I want to guess I want to think.
I want my mind to be on the brink.
I want to touch I want to feel.
I don't care if it isn't real.
Then I felt this deep burning sensation, and I knew their had to be some of you in my, hallucination...
Author notes
My first erotica poem other people will read here goes nothing!! PS: I chose option 2!!
A contest entry
- ~~~AHA...AGAIN #2~~~ by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended May 19, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
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This is very unique... I like the feeling in this piece and how you can be addicted to someone and see them through a different, sexy light.
Anyway great write ♥ -
AHA! I love it! This isnt exactly erotic..its more like sensual and I find it totally cute! I love the rhyme here and the way u have ended the work!! The word is isn't not isint...might wanna change that?
But I absolutely like this one!!
Thanks for entering and good luck!!
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