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forever lost

one moment...
agony
you left
me there
all alone and you
forgotten everything

no time could heal
no time-erase
no words to say
can take it all away
no hope to take it all back to me,
to you
all is lost
though never really there

day after day
night after nightmare
tear after tear
just cry,
just despair

didn`t i mean anything to you?
how could you do this?
how can you live
knowing that you killed me,
knowing that i cared?

and i know
that no one
will ever be there
for me
but i hope
and i lie
to myself

because i believed

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  • Leaving Today
    May 19, 2007
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    Scattered words, but conveying the exact message. I liked your poem. Brevity in each stanza..nice.