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Laugh with ease

Hearing your whispers
Leave your lips
Power untapped

Make a proud man
Cry in anguish
or
Laugh with ease

Tears falling from your eyes
Make me lose hope
In all that we have lost

Laughter from inside
Renews all that I’ve lost
Over again

Soft skin under
a
Tender hand
Tempts me to remain asleep

Dreaming of you
The day I can hold you
Kiss away your pain
Heal your broken bones

Trust me
as I do you
Together we'll reach the end
surviving death again

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I love you with all my heart and soul, no matter what I love you. Please believe me, I want to hear your voice early in the morning.

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  • vampira1665 silver member
    May 20, 2007
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    Beautiful, simply beautiful.


  • Seven Kinky
    May 19, 2007

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    Beautiful. And look...my fingers work again! Thank you so much for keeping me awake last night as long as you did. I would have gone to sleep without doing anything for it at all...and it WAS bad...worse than I thought. I'm fucking achy all over this morning from it...but alive and that's what matters. I love you, too, sweeting. And tell Josh not to worry; I'll be seeing you two very soon and I've got major rib crackers on reserve for both of you.

    P.S. Love the last stanza. Vaguely reminiscent of my favorite poem. Mad love, sug.


  • SuddenShift
    May 19, 2007
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    As Always

    Thank you.