we've made it through eleven years
only one left ot go
many friens youll leave behind
one lst homecoming one last prom
one last year in theese halls
one last season of football or volleyball
its our last year make it our best
it'll all be worth it when
we walk across the stage
walk to get our diplomas
and shake mr. lewis's hand
you'll see everyone in ten years..so sad
Please tell me what you think
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one more great poem, i mean you are just incrediable as a writer, i tell you. this is good, keep it flowing
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a fair poem, though honestly it doesn't seem to get across as much emotion as it could or should. Also, there are quite a few spelling and grammar errors...check it for yourself, I think you'll notice them.
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