Swallowed whole, taken fully
Given its soul
Given fully
Hated slow
Hated slowly
Seeing dim, seeing dimly~~~
The light it breaks through the skin!
The fire it burns beneathe my skin!
The hatred I've learned breaks my skin!
The love I still yearn for. . .
Swallowed within. . . .
Teaching myself the lessons
Of this life
That has been so accursedly
Placed into my hands
Do as ye will
As long as ye harm none. . . .
A vowe you broke
Fucking your way
Through the night as your words
Graced my ears
Beguiling me to
Allay my fears
That the truth
Was what you were doing
My little nymph.
My little nymph.
My fucking little bitch
Whore,
Slut given in
To canrnal dreams
Carnal sins carry you forth
Dragging me along for the ride
On my face, let the road
Tan my hide, in crimson
Oh the pearls fall down my cheeks
Oh the crimson blinds my eyes. . . .
How I longed for you each night!
The light it breaks through the skin!
The fire it burns beneathe my skin!
The hatred I've learned breaks my skin!
The love I still yearn for. . .
Swallowed within. . . .
Gods, set me free
From the web you have weaved
Let me go
Away from thee
I swallow, my last tears for you
Love4 burning still in my heart. . . .
For true love is undying.
For my love, is eternal.
But how I loathe thee
My little nymph,
My little nymph
Bit
Whore
Fucking your way through
Carnal dreams and pleasures
Seeking to end
The realisation
You cannot feel anything
Within. . . .
When I hold so many tears
I hold so much love
I hold all my soul. . .
Within.
My little nymph.
My little nymph.
My fucking little bitch
Whore,
Slut given in
To canrnal dreams
Carnal sins carry you forth
Dragging me along for the ride
On my face, let the road
Tan my hide, in crimson
Oh the pearls fall down my cheeks
Oh the crimson blinds my eyes. . . .
How I longed for you each night!
The light it breaks through the skin!
The fire it burns beneathe my skin!
The hatred I've learned breaks my skin!
The love I still yearn for. . .
Swallowed within. . . .
The light it breaks through the skin!
The fire it burns beneathe my skin!
The hatred I've learned breaks my skin!
The love I still yearn for. . .
Swallowed within. . . .
Swallowed within. . . . .
Author notes
corse language. . . .
FUCK!
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interesting my friend, I feel your anger, your sorrow, your pain from each word etched from the crevice that is/was your broken heart but alas, I know you to be this strong individual, one whom I used to speak to for many nights and have the most intellectual conversations i've ever had.... thus in turn, I've always found you to be this other deity, one whom can accomplish whatever it is he wishes...
but this, this creation of darkness is etched well in my eyes... all I have learned from experiencing this is, 'let it make you be stronger as a person, accept the fact and move on for that person was just a junction in the road of your life that will test you...' I feel that this is the reason why we have experiences as this, maybe i'm just being optimistic, but I feel as if no one deserves a treatment as this from a whore...
I hope you are uplifted in someway shape or form since this happened, my friend...
Ta-ta,
Gabriel
P.S.
I believe it was you that started calling me 'darkling' dear friend, hehe...
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broken skin...
She did you wrong and she's a bitch? Yep you got your message across!
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This is an awesomely well written piece.
I loved the diction that you used and the imagery to hilight the idea that you were trying to get across
and I think it worked all very well.
I think you certainly hit the nail in the head with this surefire knock out piece.
it did hold my interest to the very end. keep writing and hope to see more writing by you sometime soon -
Wow
This poem, song, creation! is just amazing! There is some many parts I love that I cannot choose only one part to admire. I read every line like it was a beautiful wilting rose. I do admire this part the most
"The light it breaks through the skin!
The fire it burns beneathe my skin!
The hatred I've learned breaks my skin!
The love I still yearn for. . .
Swallowed within. . . ."
I like that you also repeat it thoughout the poem. I also like this part too and how too you repeated it throughout the poem
"My little nymph.
My little nymph.
My fucking little bitch
Whore,
Slut given in
To canrnal dreams
Carnal sins carry you forth
Dragging me along for the ride
On my face, let the road
Tan my hide, in crimson
Oh the pearls fall down my cheeks
Oh the crimson blinds my eyes. . . .
How I longed for you each night!"
Though there was one line that did not fit, I do not know if it was a typo or not, but I was defenly confused
"Love4 burning still in my heart. . . ." Is the '4' suppost to be there? Well anyways great write poet, never stop writing...
--Darkkitty
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quite an effort here
It appears she done him wrong and he didn't take it well; This has a classic kind of approach...The heavens are disturbed by these events, the cosmos sheds tears... so the anger shakes the world and the words of emotion reach for the maximim effect...so very passionately portrayed here; I was not thrilled with the word choices and judgments but as a modern street style telling it is a magnificent effort here...PK
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A M E N !!!
I am with you on this one!! I feel the anger, passion, love and hate here!! Wow! Incredible write!
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