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The Painting

How I love this painting,
As I lean softly against it so,
He reminds me of a handsome prince,
I imagine he is my beau.

I clearly see his castle beyond,
And the horsemen in the distance,
If I could reach in and pull him out,
I know I would in an instant.

How often I dream as I stand here,
That I was a beautiful princess,
Living forever in his castle,
In golden slippers and a gorgeous dress.

We would be so happy together,
Magic would surround our love,
There would be such things as fairies,
And messages delivered by doves.

Sweets, cupcakes and candy,
Would adorn our tables to eat,
Everything our hearts desired,
Would always be a treat.

My painting I cherish daily,
I look at it with delight,
It makes my heart feel full,
Every day and every night.

05/18/07

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  • Candy6
    June 5, 2007
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    well written poem.


  • Ethereal One gold member
    May 20, 2007

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    very well written

    This is a very romantic translation of the picture. Your words express how deeply she loves her handsome Prince. I think we would all love to have such a Prince in our lives.

    Thank you for entering this contest, and good luck!

    Aurora 2012