First kisses always seem so cliche,
"We were in love and it happened today"
But our kiss darling was a little more special,
Even though it's long faded away...
We were young and in love,
Or so that's what we said.
You were new to this dating thing,
And it sounded so sweet in my head.
Everyone pressured us into giving in,
But baby we never did what they wanted.
We were happy being innocent,
It wasn't sex that we hunted.
The first time I went to your house,
We watched finding nemo on the big screen.
A tickle fight and a kiss on the cheek,
When your lips found mine I could have screamed.
My heart beated against my chest,
It screamed out your name in love baby.
Yours screamed back in unison,
And I was glad you were lying there with me.
Three months into our relationship,
I stole your first kiss.
And baby I know it's cliche,
But it's the only one i've missed.
A little reminder to let you know,
Your kisses always left me weak.
And after everything that we went through,
I still can't handle seeing you kiss her cheek.
Author notes
I don't know.
It sounds waaaay too cliche for me.
Plus I think it aint what your looking for.
It's pretty simple.
A contest entry
- When A Kiss Is Not Just A Kiss... by poet2angels.
575 points, ended May 25, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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holy god!!!!!!!1 lol this is just really good no matter how cliche it is. You did amazing job babe and good luck in the contest.
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It is actually very lovely and sweet...I like the ending...
TY for entering my contest!
Lynda
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I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm not usually good at writing love poems....
I often find theyre too cliche.
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The subject of the poem itself, is a tad cliche, but the poem itself is lovely. I really like this piece.
Good luck in the contest and have a wonderful day,
FallenPoeticAngel
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