When our lips meet for the first time
And the heat of passion explodes and soars on high.
We’re on the edge of love’s sweet desires.
When your heart gracefully entwines with mine.
Help me to experience the sweet heavenly bliss.
The pounding of the heart beating with fire…
Oh… please show me, babe…
Please show me what it feels like…
When a kiss is not just a kiss.
Let me feel deep down inside,
The warmth, the depth of your love divine
And with your kiss,
Take me to the stars above…
Lose me in a seduction so blind
I cannot see
When you steal my heart with your mysterious and magical love.
For willingly,
I give it to you,
To treasure forever
As I am lost,
So willingly lost,
In the long, long moment of your kiss, my love.
Your sweet kiss of enchantment bold
Makes me desire to want to hold you even more;
Body, heart and soul.
Such an unforgettable kiss as yours…
Oh… I never dreamed the experience would be like this;
The longing,
The thirsting,
The craving
And the hungering
For the taste of your sweet lips,
Dripping with golden sweet honey
From out of the comb;
Life’s sweet nectar of love.
Oh… how I long to love you even more.
I dream of kissing you savory lips
And tracing your body with my fingertips…
Again and again
As we are forever linked by the love we share
Entwined,
Gracefully swirled together
Floating in a glass of sweet red wine.
As you keep showing me, babe,
What it feels like…
When a kiss is not just a kiss.
Author notes
This is not just any old kiss... THIS IS A KISS! LOL! I hope is fit what you are wanting for this contest. If not DQ it. Thank you.
A contest entry
- When A Kiss Is Not Just A Kiss... by poet2angels.
575 points, ended May 25, 2007, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A Kiss by strangerforeigner.
405 points, ended September 5, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - but not just any kiss... by JinSays.
1532 points, ended September 21, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very nice, thank you for entering this. I like your style.
love,
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jin,
You are welcome for entering. Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it!
~Donna~
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Wow, you really took the time to describe a KISS. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
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Hey,
You are most welcome. Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. When I describe a kiss... I describe a KISS! LOL! Good lucck with judging.
~Donna~
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This is really a beautiful and romantic poem. You did an amazing job with it. Thank you for entering it into my contest and God bless you in everything you do and write, and good luck to you and your poem in this contest.
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Thanks, Joel.
I am glad that you felt it was romantic enough. As you can tell from the comment below that I don't write this stuff very often or at least in this way. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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(mouth has dropped open) WHOA!
Damn Woman - This is the hottest write I've ever read from you! I bet you had your lips in a pucker and your panties in a bind while writing this one!
Whew! I'm sweating over here!
Yep! This was certainly a trophy winner!
Great Write!
Tang
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LOL! Gee, it was really that bad, eh? See I can write some hot poems too! You're sweating and it's only 72 out!
Thank you for reading. commenting and applauding. I appreciate it! Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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;lovely!
Wonderful lyrics for this theme...
very catchy and beautifully written, DOnna!
Lynda
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Lynda,
Thank you. I'm glad that you liked it. I thought it might fit perfectly with what you wanted since I did take the cue from your description of the contest. Thanks again.Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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