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My Friend

Why did you leave me alone?
Now I’m crying at home
Why isn’t your hand in mine?
I really need it this time
Cause you left me insane
When you boarded that plane
Over seas you go
How far I don’t know
But how long is two years
Down fall my tears
So from now until we meet again
I shall miss you my friend

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  • Moon Raven
    May 18, 2007

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    Awwww. I'm sorry about your friend. It's good to see you writting again! I missed reading your stuff! This is very good. I love the flow and the rhyme is well crafted.