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Divorce

sorrow, regret, pain
never to merge again
One person putting another through hell
Because they know their weakness so well.

Author notes

I wrote this for my ex…
Two years to get the divorce… he wanted to keep everything and I just walk away like the worthless wife I was for 12 years..
A year later I still can’t get him out of my life because I made the mistake of trying to sell our house.  Now I have to go back to court because he wouldn’t list it with a real-estate agent (per our agreement) and he is trying to force me to sell it to him for a bargain price.

Written July 30th, 2003

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  • Marcellus
    August 20, 2003
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    So sad! Divorce sure sucks. Sounds like you really had a miserable struggle. Hope joy shines in your life now. Sucks that he's being such a ass.
    Marcellus


  • sidewinder silver member
    August 6, 2003
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    for a long time i saw the pains of divorce through my brother...
    and then he wonders why I never got married.
    Life shows one funny things at time!
    Keep penning on!
    Bill


  • smiley
    August 6, 2003
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    this was fabulous, it took me three years before I got my divorce. Time will heal your heart. great job.

    Yvonne

  • Reconciled Rose
    July 30, 2003
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    I know the pains of divorce, I haven't had one myself but my parents. My dad had a really hard time. (Stupid mom) ANyways, great poem. Its perfect for the contest!

    Sending Jesus' Forgiving Love,
    The Maimed Flower
    (Keepin' it PG)


  • July 30, 2003
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    well done

    oh =(
    my parents are divorced but i don't think they ever went thru all this hassle...well i cant really remember anyway..umm
    this definately describes *divorce* and much more
    very emotional, this.
    good luck =)

  • RobertRichard
    July 30, 2003
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    How true, that certainly 'sums' it up.
    I hope you win.
    Thank you for the comment.
    Good luck on all accounts.
    RR

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