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Song

You're lyrics
in my head.
I don't love you
you're wrong,
you're just a song
to me.

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  • Just4u
    May 22, 2007

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    Brings to mind an old Neil Diamond song..

    She was morning
    And I was night time
    I one day woke up
    To find her lying
    Beside my bed
    I softly said
    Come take me

    For Ive been lonely
    In need of someone
    As though Id done
    Someone wrong somewhere
    I dont know where
    Come lately

    You are the sun
    I am the moon
    You are the words
    I am the tune
    Play me

    Song she sang to me
    Song she brang to me
    Words that rang in me
    Rhyme that sprang from me
    Warmed the night
    And what was right
    Became me

    You are the sun
    I am the moon
    You are the words
    I am the tune
    Play me

    And so it was
    That I came to travel
    Upon the road
    That was thorned and narrow
    Another place
    Another grace
    Would save me

    You are the sun
    I am the moon
    You are the words
    I am the tune
    Play me

    Hugs...Eddy


  • I am a Mindfreak
    May 20, 2007

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    Short poem but full of so much meaning.
    Lines 5-6 are my favorite because to me, it feels like you're referring to the love you thought you felt for someone as a song, or saying, that just plays over and over again in your head.