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Down the abyss

I though he was my friend,
But no,
He pushed me,
Now as i fall I realize the horror.
down,down,down

Many fall with me,
none are happy,
all stabbed in the back!
Pushed
down,down,down

Why did this happen?
What happens next?
Is there a bottom...
to this dark abyss?
down,down,down

There a screams, on all sides.
What are those wings?
Their coming over...
what it it!
It the locusts,
Here to torture me
all the way...
down,down,down.

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  • Dead Fishies
    May 23, 2007
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    It was dark and haunting. Very good. Good luck in the contest.