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The Kingdom

I have been a day dreamer, all my life
Think about dragons, kinghts, fairies and so forth
Fanstay was my life
My breathe
My soul
I look at the mirror every now and then
Everytime I look in the mirror
I see a knight staring back at me
My heart sikps beats
My stomach runs cold
I see his glossy diry brown hair
His bright brown eyes
Staring at me
I guess he has been in a battle
Sweat runs down his neck
Sometimes I dream of him
I look for him
He is my prince

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  • Inverted Illusions
    October 25, 2007

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    wow girl

    Girl, this poem was so cool and romantic,hhos your prince charming(saying that in a complamenting way)because i think i've found mine!


  • Ethereal One gold member
    May 20, 2007

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    very romantic

    Your words express a love for this knight in your mirror. I like what you have seen and put into your poem.

    Thank you for entering this contest, and good luck!

    Aurora 2012


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    May 19, 2007

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    you know i think this is a cool poem without even looking at the pic, i know i like this, you did a great job on this, keep it flowing