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Know It

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Know who I am,
what my desires are
Do not neglect them
for you will be left
crying tears of regret

Ask anything of me and
I will satisfy your wildest desires
Cast your fears to the side
make your feelings apparent
don’t make me guess
I do not want to play games

Know who you are
Show your true self
Feel who I am
Let me feel you
Open your eyes
See what I offer
I am what you  wanted
now take me,
nurture me,
love me

Know that I am yours
Just know it



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  • Laura
    May 19, 2007

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    ohhh this is beautiful the imagery and emotions you have created are amazing very well done indeed i totally love it xxx

  • Puppydog gold member
    May 19, 2007

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    SO TOUCHING AND EMOTIONAL!

    It is always sincere and true when two share not only their words but their honesty and love. Both honesty and understanding is needed to make any relationship work.


  • Whoochi gold member
    May 18, 2007

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    wooohoo, so self-assured and confidence spilled over this poem. Would love to be able to say this to someone Excellent! You rock!


  • soulfultia gold member
    May 18, 2007

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    This is a wonderful write, it carries a sense of strength hand and hand with a touch of sensuality. Excellent work, wonderful flow and rhythm. This was certainly my pleasure to read this evening ~Tia


  • Peteskid gold member
    May 18, 2007

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    very nicely done

    a well written statement of point of view on sexuality and relationships here, very assertive and self affirming...PK

    . Rewarded 4

  • untouched pages
    May 18, 2007

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    To me this almost feels like a cry of the heart... the urning of a soul to be loved... just wanting that one person to give all they have to them.. its a great write.. I love it!! (it reminds me of what my heart as said more than once)

    ~*Cristy*~
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