Missing person
[nothing left]
But the sweet/salty mix
Of tears from pure joy/pain
-no-vacancy
[no room at the inn]
I'll shut you out
Or let you in
Confusing thoughts
[who am i]
I hear myself cry
anguish; rage; plain confusion
Constant changes,
Im completely lost
From this tangled path
Me, Myself, and I decided to take
A different boy
Every two damn weeks
Keep myself busy
Never let the mind wander free
Sit alone, thoughts pour out
I cant think, im thinking too much
Shaking;motionless, er exuse me
e-motionless
Such a random mix,
of random thoughts
in a random place
in my random mind
Just like
a bunch of random people
on a random road
have random S-E-X
Sex, the big question of the century
Do they care, do they not?
How the care, have you even thought
i.-dont-.know!
Im like dr. suess
random words, all on
the same damn page
but without the
(childlike quality)
Author notes
I lost the leash on my thoughts, let the fly, and i dont even want to begin to understand what all this means. The farthest im gonna go is this...
Have you ever read a dr suess book? the really have no point to them, most of them have a different point every 6 lines, i think this is what happened here, but a more teenage version....
muahahahaha i love you reading this, on and on and on
byebye
Brittney's finally lost it, let me know if you agree
Comments
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Interesting Part 1
Very well penned and quite entertaining and interesting. I liked the flow and the woridng involved. Interesting work though all round and very well worded keep up the good work onward to part 2 I go
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"Im like dr. suess
random words, all on
the same damn page
but without the
(childlike quality)"
I like this a lot...it's different. The title caught my eyes aswell. Great job! keep writing!
-Jess
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Im glad you liked it, its like i took freewriting, and made it a little more structured...peace-->the mad one
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