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New, Story, Part two: The Test of Chill

After the dinner and desert Goth went back to her room, and sleept off the excitment of the day before, almost forgetting she was about to have a test to see if she was going to become Chill or go back home. (Bring Bring Bring) Her alarm sounded she quickly got up and dressed, she was wearing her useual riding close when Sir Prensten came into the room
"Follow me GothLilly, I hope your ready to ride today. You will ride your own dragon Midnight for the test, and we all hope you pass. This is Titan and Thomas." At there names the boys nodded Titan was a green haired pink eyed boy, Cute in Goth's eyes, Thomas was a brown haired blacked eyes child with a odd smirk.
"Hello, I'm Titan McGray, this is my brother Thomas McGray." Titan's vocie was rouf, but soft
"It's nice to meet you Titan and Thomas I hope you both pass." Goth said this with an arifical smile, really she wanted to be the only new Chill for the seson, but these two looked good.
"All right here we are," they had come to a very large, very grassy field, "Titan you first, Thomas you'll be next, Then Gothlilly." Sir Prensten said in a low comanding voice
"Saddle up Titan the show us what you can do." As Prensten said this Titan saddled his Navy blue dargon,
"I'm ready sir." Titan said as he pulled a belt tighter around the dragon
"Go!" Prensten watched Titan left off with grace, Titan pulled his dragon into a superbe barle roll, coming out of it just before hitting a tree the twirling around in the sky he manuvered the dragon into a series of flips and twist all after another, Everything when quickly, Titan then tried a triple flip, roll right after, but ended up falling off his Dragon and landing in the grass next to Prensten, Prensten quickly helped Titan up, and looked at Thomas,
"Your turn Thomas, Titan you will get your results agter Gothlilly has gone."
"Yes sir." Titan looked as if he had done the most embarassing things in his life
"I'm lefting off now sir." Thomas's vocie came froma above, he didn't get far, one hitting the clouds thomas fell off landing on top Of Goth. Thomas got up looking quite confused, Goth looked at his yellow dragon, it looked as if it were trying to get something out of its side. goth Wisled and the dragon laned and just like Midnight there was a dragon blade stuck in his side.
"Sir Prensten I think Thomas should try another dragon, A dragon blade had hurt his own." Prensten looked at the knife Goth was pointing to
"Gelbert fetch another dragon for young Thomas here, Gothlilly go ahead and do you retine."
Goth quickly saddled and got on Midnight
"You ready, we have to do extra goo Midnight, be on the look out for flying knives and any other sharp object that can go trought your scales, lets go."
Midnights voice came into Goth's head "I have had this planed since yesterday all you have to do is look like you manovering me and enjoy the ride." With that they quickly lefted off, once off the ground Midnight did triple flip roll right after, and susceded in landing it, right after she manovered herslef into the sky to do a sky flio dive, quickly the fliped on there back they almost landed on the back, but right at the ground Midnight fliped ot her feet and landed it. Thomas did a series of flip twist and landed
"Titan you need to learn, but you pass, Thomas I'm sorry, but you're going home, Gothlilly that was the best riding from a beginner I have ever seen, you pass with flying colors." with that Thomas packed and the other two went back to the castle.
"Harrly, King Wingten's chambers he wants to talk to me." Goth said once back in her room
"Yes Mam." Harlly came out of her own small bedroom and escorted Goth trough a seres of maze like hall, Ending at a door wiht lion knoker painted green and purple.

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  • afterthought
    May 22, 2007
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    wow u r really good i wish i was as talented as u:


  • JoyfulWriter
    May 18, 2007

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    My friend, you are so very amazing at this story-telling! I found this to be quite excellent....smiles, Terry