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with out wax

who will guard the guards
i realy wish to know
thy dont guard them self
and some times it shows
thy are the ones that cover for others
sadly enough thy always get in trouble
so who will guard the guards
i know the answer
god is the one
and he last forever

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  • Dead Fishies
    May 23, 2007
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    Great job. If flowed nicely. Well written. Good luck in the contest.