Oh, my sister
What have you done
Why have you done this
This trouble of yours
This love of yours
Oh, my sister
Was it worth it
What of the cost
What have you done
This deed you did
Oh, my sister
Was he worth it
Is it worth it
The cost is great
This passion of yours
Oh, my sister
What is love
What is caring
Who is he
That he is worth it
He who cost so much
Oh, my sister
I tell you now
Watch your step
Watch you actions
For is it worth it
Oh, my sister
My darling sister
What have you done
What are you doing
Did I not warn you
Of this path
Oh, my sister
This path of yours
Will lead to trouble
Only pain
Only suffering
Oh, my sister
Heed my warning
Here my cries
See my actions
Do as I do
Oh, my sister
Warn you I did
Warn you I did
What more can I do
Then to warn you again
Oh, my sister
Always will I be
By your side
When all goes wrong
There I will be to help
Author notes
Option #8 - 'Coca-Cola.' :]
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Very well written. You got your point across well and showed an emotion of mourning.
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this poem is sad but full of love. i hope everything works out for your sister. thankyou so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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This is a heartfelt and sincere write. Each stanza may have few words, but we are still able to descipher the true meaning behind them all. Nicely done.
Good luck.
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I don't quite know what I think of this poem. It is ok, not your best. I know you, you can do much better than this.
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Bro this is very beautiful. Great job. It is exhilarating
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