All the hurts and disappointments
I have experienced in my life
become a compilation of nothingness
I have seen the highest heights,
the deepest depths of love
my heart could ever feel
in your eyes
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For my grandaughter, Iyana.
In a list
A contest entry
- Seven or fewer lines!! by Trueheartforlife.
355 points, ended May 20, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Yet another beaitiful poem by you. She is truly lucky to have you, the love is strong, I can feel it in your words. She is beautiful also! ~Nikki
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Short and powerful indeed. She is an angel, in every sense of the word. Lending healing to your spirit, love and joy to your heart. She's so much more that an adorable child with spunk.
How very blessed we are to have her presence, and yours, among us. Thank you so much for sharing.
Love,
Ash
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DEEPLY TOUCHING AND SWEET!
It is our children who with their innocent love help us through each and every day.
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what a wonderfully spectacular tribute to our lil MISS THANGGGG...she such a pricess and she will forever hold this in her heart from her wonderful noni!
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OMG this is amazing wow the emotions just jupm out short yet effective i totally love it very well done and i just wanna add lol she is totally beautiful totally and utterly you must be so proud xxx
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